Some designs for my first gig - constructive criticism please! *Updated with pic*

I like the thickness (or thinness.. I should say).. better. You could actually bring the lines at the center EVEN closer (to signify the center of the web), but MUCH better! You are brave to put your pics up for criticism! I'm sure all of my stuff would get ripped apart!

See how the lines are basically touching between the eyes then go outward and up. I could totally improve my shape too. haven't practiced spidey in a long time!

I have found that the lines in Spiderman are easier to do and look better if they go thick to thin instead of trying to get them all even, symmetrical, and the same thickness all the way through.