Any ideas on improving this?

Hey all you amazing people,,,I am doing my first paid belly tommorrow..We have alot of Maori culture in N.Z..so this is a traditional looking Maori deaign representng th father,mother,son and baby with the bottom koru patterns representing the next generation..I will fatten up the mother side tomorrow but this is my practise on dear hubby. I appreciate your thoughts.


I was thinking of fully glittering the heart in red???

whoops I was supposed to upload the one with no name...

I am a beginner myself and I think it is so well done, clean and crispy, the only thing I would add is some highligths (white lines on the up curves) and my very personal opinion the baby's name a little bit bigger.

haha... is your hubby laying on a carpet?.. i do that with my hubby too.... not that he likes it... but i spoil him with watching soccerball or a evening at the pub.... just to make him happy and for me... lol.
but i like the design i would make the outline bigger and with some fat swirls... and little bit dots? but nice anyway!

haha.. I am nice he is on a mattress with pillows for his head so he can watch tele... He is such a honey.
When I went to bed last night I thought the same thing for the swirls I think they will go really well together. I am still not sure about the glitter.... Willl post a pic when I'm done .thanks for your replies.

Well...My belly appointment has been postponed til next Tuesday.. So I have some time to make some improvements and play a bit more. I would like to makes it look more 3D. Looks a bit flat to me..There's this week challenge.

well let us know.. i very curious !! good luck... sure it will be great!!! it is already and on a belly it looks even better!!!

Will do..

Beautiful. Yes, a bit of drop-shadowing around the bottom edges would look good.

I agree with Luz. Don't be afraid to have the name big enough that it crosses parts of the koru.

Have fun!