Need some verbage

So I am wanting to advertise Belly Painting as an option on my website but every time I read what I write I end up scrapping it.
It just sounds creepy lol.....
Anyone want to let me peek at your verbage? I won't go word for word without your permission.

wish I was better ith words

See my website... just check out our sites to see what we all put out there.

I didn't want to "invade" people's sites lol
But now that I have your permission.... don't mind if I do

Um... checking out someone's website isn't "invading" ... it is there for people to look at... to get ideas from sure, to lift and use exactly, not so much!

It really depends on the market your hitting?

If you want to come across as very professional, you may live in a very conservative area like I do, you can use terms like; gestational paintings, gestational belly paintings, maternity belly paintings.

If you live in a more liberal area, you can use terms like; belly bump painting, pregnant bellies, bump paintings, belly art....etc.

Hope that helps some??

I am too lazy to look but I think I have mine termed as "prenatal paintings". I do live in a conservative area where people go "uh, why would anyone do that??" so I mention baby book keepsakes, pregnancy portraits and other things of that nature.

http://www.barefootbutterfly.com/pregnancy-arttummypainting.html


I like to call it Pregnancy Tummy Painting I've never really loved the word 'belly'.. maybe cause I still have a fat one from giving birth 3 times?? lol

Prenatal Belly painting, gestational painting, baby bump painting, a way to memorialize your upcoming blessed event, Great for memory books, great for baby showers or for a private photo shoot, I often say the paint will cover any imperfections you may be self conscious about.
I also try to let my photos do the talking for me.

barefootbutterfly wrote:http://www.barefootbutterfly.com/pregnancy-arttummypainting.html
I've never really loved the word 'belly'..

I feel the same way. Maybe because we never used that word growing up. We said tummy or stomach. I have always associated the word "belly" with obesity... probably because of the term "beer belly".

Gosh, yeah. I think the "pre-natal" that I kept putting in there made it sound too medical or something...
This is what I have so far, what do you all think?

Maternity Tummy Art
Looking for a way to memorialize your upcoming blessed event?
Have your baby bump turned into a piece of art!
Also known as Belly Painting, it is perfect for memory keepsakes, pregnancy portraits, baby showers or even a private photo shoot

Have stretch marks, scars or other imperfections?
Don't worry! The paint will cover any imperfections you may be self conscious about.

All designs are unique and tailored for each client and pregnancy.

All Paints, Glitter, Gems, and Glue used are professional grade and FDA approved.

There is a discount given if you would like multiple sessions throughout your pregnancy.

Rates are influenced by complexity of design and how far you are from area code 33765.

Looks great to me!

Change "area code" to "zip code", and you are golden

That wording looks great very professional!

I will be using the term Prenatal Belly Painting. That's when I get the chance to do one. lol