My very first banner

by funfacesbybrenda Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:23 am

I'm doing my very festival and I want to to be ready.. I asked my friend if she can help me and design one for me Smile

So far this is the first sample

My very first banner Image-2

What do you guys think?

Thanks

by Creabella Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:38 am

I think it looks great, very colourful!

by fesspenter Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:30 am

Dear funfacesbybrenda:
On your banner, you have

Face Painting & Glimmer body art
For All your events

I KNOW what Glimmer body art is.... Glitter Tattoos. I do not know if the general public knows what it is. If this were my poster, I would have
Face Painting & Glitter Tattoos
For All Your Events

On the second line, you have Capitalized
For All
and lower case
your events
It should be
For All Your Events
or
for all your events
It is display type, so there really are no hard and fast rules regarding Capitals vs. lower case. Write it whichever way makes you happy... just be consistent.

Please feel free to disregard my suggestions, should you disagree.

Thank you!

by funfacesbybrenda Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:47 am

fesspenter wrote:Dear funfacesbybrenda:
On your banner, you have

Face Painting & Glimmer body art
For All your events

I KNOW what Glimmer body art is.... Glitter Tattoos. I do not know if the general public knows what it is. If this were my poster, I would have
Face Painting & Glitter Tattoos
For All Your Events

On the second line, you have Capitalized
For All
and lower case
your events
It should be
For All Your Events
or
for all your events
It is display type, so there really are no hard and fast rules regarding Capitals vs. lower case. Write it whichever way makes you happy... just be consistent.

Please feel free to disregard my suggestions, should you disagree.

Thank you!

Thanks for the suggestions I really appreciate..... I will tell my friend about because I have no idea how to do this !
I was thinking some like Face Painting Glitter tattoos and much more for all your events

What do you think ?

Thanks

by Lacey's Faces Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:59 am

It looks great!
I agree with Fess for sure.

I would also like to add that for me personally i like the white lettering on the 2nd one, it is far easier to read. In fact the baby belly i couldn't read at all on the first one, The format and color makes all the letters blend together.
Other than that i think it looks great as well!

by rubyzcreationz Wed Aug 28, 2013 12:40 pm

I agree with Fess and Lacey. Nice not to have to retype.. Lol.
But other than that, looks good.

by funfacesbybrenda Wed Aug 28, 2013 1:23 pm

Thanks guys Smile

I'm removing the belly painting Smile

! Thanks for input it really helps a lot in the other side I'm changing the picture I'm adding one with my 2 girls better !
My very first banner Image-6